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i've lost my way,
i had a plan.
i can't remember
where i was headed.
i knew i had a place
to travel to,
i knew i had a life i
wanted.
i lost that thought,
i have forgotten everything.

i've changed my mind,
i want more.
i haven't found what
i'm looking for.
i need some help
to get where i should
go.
please show me the
right road to follow.

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i don't know what
to do with me life.

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  • wuzisname
    August 28

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    As your mind grows in knowledge, you will constantly discover that your plans will change because you get smarter, and better at everything! I am 45 and my plans changed also. When I was 14, I wanted to be an adult. Now I would do anything to be 14 and grounded


    • wondering.willow
      September 9
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      haa. i just want to do things
      right so i can do all i want
      when i'm an adult! (:


      • wuzisname
        September 10
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        Sounds like you have a great desire to do things right. ALWAYS Remember though, The main ingredient in making your goals come true is to plan and follow through the plan. Don't get side tracked and loose you future because you want a quick good time. one drink at the wrong time could end all your future plans. Hang on girl. you in for one heck of a ride


  • RacinThePen
    August 13

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    Aww.. You're only 14.. you have PLENTY of time to figure out where you want to go in life. I'm 18 and still don't have the slightest idea. Anyways, with time I'm sure the answer will reveal itself to you. Great write

    • thank you (:
      i just feel like
      i knew what i
      wanted and how
      to get there, but
      now i just don't.
      and i'm sure you'll
      find your way! (:

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