Once again just like before
You've ripped my heart in two
Just upped and left, without a word
What the hell did I do to you
I loved you with all the love I had
No matter how hard it became
My unconditional love for you
Has filled my heart with shame
The man I married and so adored
Is no longer that man to me
Yes I love him, I always will
Though together we can never be
Too many times I've felt this pain
A pain that will never heal
So to you my love I say goodbye
With the last of the love I feel
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- F*** Love by HazelEyedGirl.
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Just upped and left, without a word
What the hell did I do to you
Very nice set of words. Nice. Rhythymatically went with the theme. Keep writing.
Claire -
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I really enjoyed this. The feelings that surround the lost love are really powerful. Thankyou for sharing it.
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