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Last Time

You think you have hurt me,
For the last time.
Your wrong.
It's going to replay over
And over again
Until my heart can't take it anymore.
Until I can't take it anymore.

The things that you said,
The way we worked together,
It all went down the drain
In one night.
I can't do it again.
I'm afraid.

It's happened too many times,
This ongoing train wreck of pain.
Over and over and over....again.
Please don't leave me.
I'm lost without you...

Dont ask.

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  • Topekahntr
    August 13

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    Kudows!

    You took me in several different directions. An ongoing cycle of pain and another request for reconciliation. I am not sure if you know what you want certainly the poem leaves so many possibilities. It is a jumble as often our worst moments are.