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~life can be beautiful


In the morning dew & rising sun
a  lonely heart feels the beauty of life

In the blooming flowers & soaring butterflies
She finds the joy in love & dreams of it

In the splashing waves &  blue ocean
She drowns her mind forgetting the past




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  • wave1080
    October 28
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    Awww

    Beautiful


  • sgking123 gold member
    October 24

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    wow

    very enthusiatic and zestful this peom. Optimist to the core. You did wonderful job in choice of words. i loved it all thrua nd thru.visit me sometime if you widh to.


  • miracalm
    October 18
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    hey.. jus read this poem neee..


  • Parth Sawhney
    August 14

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    good

    hey..
    nice piece...a mix of both happiness and sadness..its wonderful how u take inspiration from nature to make your life joyous and beautiful..
    nice simple piece with a great message for every1..
    keep writin'..

    take care

    -parth


    • Princess-nee
      August 15
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      Thankyou Parth for your comment,Nature indeed is the golden inspiration,It gives life and hope for us.

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