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Shield for Emos (anybody welcome)

You may think
That the world's out to get you
You know that
They'll never believe what you've been through.
But never forget this
In this world without bliss,
You aren't alone.

I've also been hurt
Emotionally crippled and bruised
I know what it feels like
When you get accused
Of being a freak
When you know that you're not
Friends are one of the few things we've got.

So stand behind me
And I'll be your shield
Cause against this world
I will not yield
And if you believe that you can get through
Then there's nothing, no one
That can stand against you.

But know that if you leave
I'll be tempted to follow
Cause I too have felt
Just a little bit hollow
But stand up to the world
And show them who's wrong
And then you'll see
How far you've gone.

So stand behind me
And I'll be your shield
Cause against this world
I will not yield
And if you believe that you can get through
Then there's nothing, no one
That can stand against you.

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  • AdrinaConti
    October 7

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    Wow, you are a lovely person who has compassion for others. That's a rarety and i like it! Your poem is beautiful and caring. It gives me hope that others are going through the same things and it is possible, with support, to get through anything. I'm not sure if i would change anything, it seems very complete.


  • PerfectFlaws
    August 31
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    Woww


  • BrokenAtBest
    August 24

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    That was very cute and caring. You must really feel this pain and know that no, it's not fun. It hurts and sometimes you wish people would leave you alone. But you seem like an amazing person and you want to try and help others from feeling that way as we often do at times. Beautiful write.


  • dukeshorts
    August 20
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    excellent

  • Firepaw
    August 19
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    Wow this is sooo good it has so much feeling in it I love it

  • devilsangel8806
    August 19
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    AMAZING!!!

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