Dark lonesome visions that haunt the disoriented minds of mad poets on bouts of manic inspiration inspired by improvished love. Inspiration that force them to write on impulse, exposing their souls like a whore's bare behind, then wearing off and leaving them to do battle with brainwashed critics who fail to understand anything beyond the subject of old trains, serial killers, lost lovers, and dead mothers. And the stunned stupid poets not knowing how to name as to why they wrote such verses patiently try to explain in hush whispery voices- the side effects of Prozac causing them to slobber, and their eyes to twitch in red rimmed sockets. Then having confessed to being just plain lously, they lash out in anger saying harsh words to shameful to name in front of little children and things. A windsong blows the trashy words back into flapping mortal mouths while they are yet yapping, then madness gets into the pen...
see Part Three
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You don`t have to be mad to live in this world, but if you are it helps as they say?????
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Wow
How did you know this is my very thoughts when I see such a display of words in the presence of others and children I must say Bravo honey
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thank you this was only some of the preface in my novel
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hey, no fair describing us...! ("dark, lonesome visions that haunt the disoriented minds of mad poets... et. al.") but then, I am just a dabbler, so I'm still sane...
I'm thinking of all the interactions/collaborations/relationships I've found inspiration in on this site... both skipping blissfully up the hill, then tumbling down in hurt and confusion...
and last, I see frustration here... (a lot! lol) with small minds pretending to be big... and again, I see feeling in this piece- this time fiery...
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Not all poets are mad
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no, some come back from it...
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Haha! A fine rant about life that is often too sad for words. Quite accurate as it is, but I feel the subtly addressed will remain as clueless as they were before. Missing hints seems to be a human tradition. But don't worry, nature has a way of fixing flaws. Thank you for creating and sharing!
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