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Denial

My black wings have withered
and blood drips from points
unknown to human eyes
Noone sees the pain
or hears the cries
For all love has been lost
in years of denial
and suffering against myself.
Pain makes the ashes
dissapear in a gust of wind.
Never before have I denied
the truth was never the truth.

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  • Evil-Angel-Babe
    October 31

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    wow...i love that poem. I like how you painted a picture with it almost...i could see what you wrote playing out in my head like a silent movie


  • xxdarkvalentixx
    August 14
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    I love it it's morbid! it's deep! it's magnificent!


    • ArmyBrat17
      August 15
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      why thank u for the comment and the applause was really feeling morbid wen i wrote this