Broken
Alone in a room with you,
Standing still,
But our Hearts Dance like wildfire.
From wall to wall,
They bounce freely,
Clashing,
But never melding together,
The walls shake,
the floors rattle,
The ceiling bends,
The pressure has intesified,
and it's about to break.
I can feel it building,
But I couldn't fathom the result,
If I break the tension.
So I do.
And the world falls apart,
as I come closer.
The pedestal I stood on,
Crumbless beneath me.
I pull my mask away,
And show you,
What you already saw.
You,
The person who could see
Past the mask I had on,
Past what I pretended to be,
Past what the others had seen.
Crying,
And broken,
You need someone.
I choose to be that person,
If you decide to let me in.
A hug, Fierce in it's meaning,
But gentle in it's touch.
A moment frozen in time,
Spent alone with you.
The tears stream down my arm,
From where they fall off your face,
The face I want to cradle,
The face the help the pain,
The pain I wanted to take away.
A broken embrace,
Time moves forward,
But still you stay,
In my arms,
a moment longer.
My heart soars,
And roars Triumph,
As yours hides,
fades away from mine,
and darkness,
Persues my celbration,
swallows it,
and I'm left alone.
Again.....
Author notes
READ AND ADD THIS GUY. HE IS LIKE TEH BEST. LOVE HIM TO DEATH.
BLOOD MAGICK
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lol did you really just hi-jack my poem and advertise me?! XD
lol, It's okay, since you did it. It just made me go WTF! when I signed on XD -
I was surprised to see how long this actually is
As once I began reading it, the story pulled me in and the lines read smooth and fast...I like what the speaker says here..the messages are strong...but I'm wondering if this would be better presented in prose form? Just a thought...I like the poem....it's melancholy and something most people can relate to.



