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Collaborated Love

My shadow bounces with my stride
Glides with high spirits
I will never see metaphoric snow again
My strands of hair dance in the wind
I'm in love with our soul strength within 

 

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  • spiritraven
    August 13

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    Very nice

    I enjoyed this write which just bounces along. Very good imagery. Thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck


  • liquidmindforever
    August 13
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    Sweet and gentle

    Restful take on the prompt
    Good luck in the contest
    liquid


  • bluehorn
    August 13
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    I like. Strong but weightless. Momentary but timeless.