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evening

 

 

 

 

moonlight
kissed their shadows
beneath a crisp winter night

and as rosy bodies danced
                       horizontally

evening whispered

love songs in the wind

 

 

 

Author notes

words from word bank: moonlight, shadow, winter, night, dance, whisper, love, wind

commented on: art of the sky.

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Comments

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  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    August 28
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    excellent

    Beautiful
    Congrats on the Honorable Mention
    It is certainly a trophy winner in my book
    Hugs
    Susan~~~

  • Topnotchsy
    August 17

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    Not sure how this only netted an honorable mention. I'd have never known there was a word bank from the poem itself, as the words are used seamlessly in this piece.


  • Randomly Beautiful
    August 14

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    So soft and lovely. Just beautiful.


  • spiritraven
    August 13

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    What a beautiful piece

    Your words paint such a beautiful picture. Lots of great imagery and I am so glad you used the word "love" in this write. I was looking forward to seeing how someone would interweave it with the other words. Thank you so much for entering my contest and best of luck

  • Billbard silver member
    August 13
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    Brevity at it's best.Good luck in the contest.

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