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Impact

every time he saw that smile

thoughts blossomed of times when he was a child

pain and glee the infusion of two

a new emotion was born in him

innocence stolen away

bravery and cowardice caged together

partners in the eternal struggle

screams and claps of thunder plowed through them

the sweat of death the scent of life

baked into the earth until the demise of our mother

 

Author notes

was listening to Nine inch Nails---The Day The World Went Away

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  • black is black
    August 31
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    Love NIN! Nice write but needs a little punctuation to bring it home