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SPLINTERS (Stomp with Kirk Franklin)


The old wooden pews
s p l i n t e r e d  
and cracked more
than a few backside
s i n n e r s
in the glory days.

Many a wounded soul
f o u n d
their voices in the
g o s p e l   c h o i r s
birthing legends;
~blues~jazz~gospel ~rap~

Sometimes life can
t w i s t and p u l l
make ya feel like hell
(loser, lost and laid off)
R e s t l e s s n e s s
and w o r r y

but then...heaven

arrives to sing....

powerfully uplifting;

A fearsome conductor
K i r k  F r a n k l i n
with his gospel warriors.


You can hear the devil
s c r e a m
gnash his teeth
b l a z i n g   h e l l
crawling on his belly
to e s c a p e
they're holy wrath.

In awe we listen
watch and learn;

H o w- to -S t o m p
the devils in our lives

E r a d i c a t e

the noise and hate

with the one muscle
the ole devil~does despise:

~Our Hearts~ of~
Music, Love and Peace.

Our soulful songs;

blues, jazz, gospel, rap.

 

...and if per chance...
you have a few pesky
devils bothering you...

Learn how to STOMP!
(link in author notes)


(oh..don't look so down lucifer

you still have the birthers right wing group?)

Author notes

song link:
STOMP..........
(simply click and listen on link below:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_AdYnFY_bZ0

Kick your chair aside and Dance until you drop!
(it's good for the soul)

especially if you have been watching
the news!
since when did healthcare become the new
four letter word?

Thankyou Kirk Franklin...I really needed to
STOMP!

: ))

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  • Dobar Dan
    August 26

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    Hello Sweet Kathleen

    You sure know how to frame a poem - a way of getting a point across - you are good hun - I will listen to the link later - I like the picture of the old splintered pews - a reminder of my younger days - when the gospel rang loud and clear in my soul - never did get all the splinters out of my arse - and satan has kept his hound nipping at my heels - but I believe that I will overcome and be in heaven when I pass over ----- this poem has a lot of "meat" to it - keep on keeping on sweetie - hugs - joe - dobar dan - rrrriiibbbittttttttt

  • =) interesting write

    I like how you had this style it's diffeent and quite intriguing great write! very original!!


  • AllexisReed
    August 14

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    I gotta say that was inspirational!! Love that song. It was one of the songs my daughter used in her dance class she taught. I couldn't tell you how many times we have danced around the house to that one. Love the poem! It was fantastic!!


  • cricketjeff gold member
    August 14

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    Excellent stuff!

    You always have a very different angle on anything, and no exception here, thoroughly enjoyed

    Jeff


  • toomysterious
    August 13

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    This is absolutely excellent, captures the whole essence of Kirk Franklin and yes isn't that a good thing to have these days, that wonderful stomp rhythm will definitely send those devils packing. These times call for some good stomping music, People like cats sure hate change esp. if it's good for them. Without change there is no progress. Now, back to the blues.


  • My Chronos gold member
    August 13

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    Written with much depth. I enjoyed reading it. Very creative. Thanks for sharing.

  • mhwillingham
    August 13

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    Very creative write. Its refreshing seeing an non-cliche Christian view point. I really dig it.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 13

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    *BOOM* That was amazing!!!. I loved this. I love Kirk Franklin, and I loved this poem. You did a fantastic job on this. Great poem, sis.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

  • mallaw
    August 13
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    Less than

    It's been MEDS for a long time.
    Who is the female in the first stanza? Old wooden pews / few backside sinners are plural / who's the female that has her glory days?
    Eradicate The noise and hate I like those lines. I feel the emotion.

  • I DIDNT LISTEN TO THE LINK, BUT I REALLY ENJOYED THIS TAKE CARE

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