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There's No Escaping...

It haunts me like a plague.
An eternal bruise.
Like Peter Pan's shadow,
Attached to my feet
Forever following my every step.
Keeping in stride with my faults and stumbles
Remembering and holding them
Just to bring them back later.
The past.

A contest entry

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  • Palas Kumar Ray
    August 15

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    Much matured thought about Time and its stickiness.
    Your style is very unique and I like it a lot.Thanks for entering and best of luck in my contest "Time".


  • Fail-me-not
    August 15
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    I like it very intense and meaningful