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Broken

Alone in a room with you,
Standing still,
But our Hearts Dance like wildfire.
From wall to wall,
They bounce freely,
Clashing,
But never melding together,
The walls shake,
the floors rattle,
The ceiling bends,
The pressure has intensified,
and it's about to break.

I can feel it building,
But I couldn't fathom the result,
If I break the tension.

So I do.

And the world falls apart,
as I come closer.
The pedestal I stood on,
Crumbles beneath me.
I pull my mask away,
And show you,
What you already saw.

You,
The person who could see
Past the mask I had on,
Past what I pretended to be,
Past what the others had seen.
Crying,
And broken,
You need someone.
I choose to be that person,
If you decide to let me in.

A hug, Fierce in it's meaning,
But gentle in it's touch.
A moment frozen in time,
Spent alone with you.
The tears stream down my arm,
From where they fall off your face,
The face I want to cradle,
The face the help the pain,
The pain I wanted to take away.

A broken embrace,
Time moves forward,
But still you stay,
In my arms,
a moment longer.
My heart soars,
And roars Triumph,
As yours hides,
fades away from mine,
and darkness,
Pursues my celebration,
swallows it,
and I'm left alone.
Again.....

She came to me broken. All I know, Is I helped repair her, somehow, in some way, but I did not walk away unscathed....

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  • MistressAkasha
    August 13

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    I LOVE THIS POEM BUTTERBALL. IT GAVE ME GOOSEBUMPS. I WANTED TO CRY HAPPY TEARS FOR YOU. KEEP HER CLOSE SHE SEEMS LIKE SHE IS SPECIAL TO YOU.....I AM GOING TO PUT THIS UP ON MY PAGE. I BELIEVE EVERYONE SHOULD READ THIS AND EVERYONE SHOULD PUT YOU UP AS A FAVORITE.


  • RubberDuckyGirl
    August 13

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    This is a beautiful poem. It made me want to cry, because it reminds me of myself. Is it supposed to be 'intensified' on line 11? Good Job. Keep at it


    • Blood Magick
      August 13
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      lol, sorry, yes it was supposed to be intensified, but when I write poetry, I usually faze out and don't care about spelling. I usually look at my poem the next day after writing it so that I'm in a clearer mind to fix spelling errors XD
      but thank you =]