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Brave lil soldier

 

Mama says we have Angels so, ...we'll both be ok

I know your tired little brother, it's been a long day.

Careful of broken boards so you don't fall through

and if it becomes hard to cross, know I'll carry you.

Lets hurry to get home before everyone gets mad

they're probably all worried and feeling real sad.

You are a brave "Little one" to go this far away

but next time we'd better stay in our yard to play.

We are almost there, 'just take a few steps more

if you can look up ahead, you'll see the front door.

Mama has medicine to make your tummy alright

then you can crawl into bed and sleep for the night.

There's no need to worry brother or cause a big fuss

for there is this beautiful Angel watching over us!

 

 

Author notes

Girl & boy crossing bridge with big hole...

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  • A floatingleaf silver member
    August 20
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    Cute write...big sister taking care of little brother, after he ran away...the angel making sure they get safely back home.


  • Frogzter gold member
    August 13

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    This is wonderful! A great take on the prompt. Full of love and compassion. Good to see you writing again!

    Blessings and best wishes,

    Frogz~