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Forgotten

Forgotten lovers
secrets in the dark
forbidden kisses
still it happens
we can be forgiven
for liking us
for loving life
for living it.

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  • chael
    August 13

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    I remember,,,,

    Being young and restless, full of curiosity and wonder. You can be forgiven but there's no need. You've done no wrong.....chael tip of the hat