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Summer Ponds

Blue Ghost,

The flame now smolder

blue. Down where the fishes

float under a blue smoke

and geese's breath. Summer heat

 all of blue smoke smouldering

under of memories of blue skies.

Days come back to me as I watch

of summer ponds waving back.

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the haze of delirium

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