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writers jam

Here I sit..no lay, on my bed
trying to think of something once said,
a poem perhaps?
No shoot..
It's writers jam..
What to do..
What to do..?
I could write about how much i like this guy,
oh no, thats kinda mushy,
I wonder if i have a soft tushy?
Wait..just why am I writing about soft tushy's..
My brother is so pushy!
OMG jam sounds so good
so now I wonder..
What is the point to this poem??
It's like trying to score a grand slam -.-*

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  • penStock
    August 12

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    The point is what you make it. You could make it jam. If not peanut butter, but I'd suggest a beverage with that. The guy can be as mushy as you'd like him to be. Your tushy will get soft if you just sit on it though. Am I making sense? I didn't think so.