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I didn’t know,

I didn’t know the trees would bow to the wind
I didn’t know the wind would wrinkle the ocean
I dint know the ocean could be made of ice
I guess now I’ve realise.

I didn’t know every bird had a song
I dint know I could play song
I didn’t know I could make a tune
Come on sing along.

I didn’t know all birds couldn’t fly
I didn’t know’ maybe the chicken is shy
I didn’t know animals could feel shy.
Really tell me why..

I didn’t know how much
I didn’t know, But now that I do know
What else don’t I know?

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  • Abner
    September 21
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    thnks for ur comments i appreciate it.


  • Arjita gupta
    September 1
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    has a feeling of innoscent quest entwined!


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12

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    I really like this, brings up child like questions I'm sure a lot of people are wondering about, including myself. I love learning new things!

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    Thanks for sharing,
    keep writing!