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*Pride takes over*

I dont want to fight.
    NO, fighting.........
I would rather kiss you.
As Pissed as I am!
As much as I want to hate you!
What do I have to do to show you?

....................... You need me..........

I know you love me!
You even said,"Our love was real!"
We was so good together.
Perfect touch, Love so strong. Passionate...
Some would say smitten about each other.
THEN.....
      BAMM.....
It all shattered down on top of me..

What the fuck happen?
Where did we go wrong?

I was such a fool, to actually believe you was different..
DAMN....
Your prides a bitch.
Selfishness...
Your a lie..
You try to act,tough.....
Like nothing matters......
I bet your confused.
You couldn't even tell me why?
I bet...
You wonder?
Wonder ,if You made the right decision?
   
            Did you asshole??
Ha... I said it without you yelling at me..
You always knew it was true..
Funny,How I hurt your pride when I called you a asshole that day...
That's where the Bull Shit started.......

So why did you go?

You gave up....
You walked out on me.
and with nothing, but your pride and greed..
Your the loser..
**********************I only have myself to gain************************
it may take me time, but
I'll find it all..
I will get it all back.
My pride and My strength.
I'll find my beautiful smile again!

Unfortunately, Like dad said," Your prides a bitch."
Nobody gets you,Nobody understands why?
It's okay though, You'll have to see me sometime.
My connection is still a great part of your family.
I'm going to make you miss me.
......................without words
without looks
..................Your going to miss me.
at the end of the night.
Your going to think about me.

Ok..SO I HAD TO GET THIS OUTTA MY HEAD.. I HATE MEN AND LOVE..grrrr....I AM STILL CONFUSED, but STARTING to SMILE AGAIN!!Hope you like it!!If You got this far, please leave a Comment!! Thanks!! :-)

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  • Outstanding

    To rid yourself of these dark emotions just as well as promote the emotions that take over the part of you that you enjoy the most, that is one destinct and perfect reason to write. I hope that after typing this up, expressing yourself, saying what you feel.. You feel better. =] Just outstanding, I just honestly don't know what else to say. I believe expressing these feelings are just the best damn thing a person could do, keep up the good work.


  • kareneisenlord gold member
    September 18

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    I hope that writing this out made you feel better! It's hard when something we thought was so wonderful is over. Often it is for the best, but it still hurts. Love takes work, and after the "honeymoon" is over; that is when the true test of it begins. Sounds like you were attracted to each other, maybe on a physical level mainly; but that never lasts. You're better off with someone who appreciates all of you; mind and spirit too. karen


  • RazorBladesRomance
    September 13
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    whoa that was very diffrent
    but in a good way .
    i liked it the whole
    u gunna miss me
    without me actually doing anything.


  • debilynn gold member
    August 19

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    not my "usual cup of tea" but it is a captivating read nonetheless. sometimes it is better to just things off our chest. makes one feel right ands better in the morn. thank you for sharing your fabulous talent. keep writing poet! God bless you always

  • karenrobertson5
    August 12
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    sometimes it just feels better to get it off your chest. good luck

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