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Pristine

Pristine mountain top
Falls the cherry blossom still
Wind leaves dew behind



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Haiku written specifically for 'Haiku me, baby' contest.

 

A contest entry

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    August 13

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    Love the imagery in this beauty. Thanks for writing for me. Thanks so much for entering my haiku contest. It's a pleasure reading your fine work