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Cafe Entertainment

Smoky, soul singer

 

Belts heavy hearted sentiments

Author notes

prompt: Hot tin roof
7 words

I don't know...I tried

In a list

A contest entry

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  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 12
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    Wow. This was excellent for so few lines. You did an amazing job with this.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~


  • Desire gold member
    August 12

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    Woot~

    Adore this piece in seven words and Heck You tried and
    Succeeded

    Love the Images this one brings
    Beautifully worded...
    Congratulations on Your shiny!
    -throws confetti-
    Woot~ Bravo!!


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent
    Best wishes in all You do
    with love & light~ Desire~*~


  • islekine gold member
    August 12
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    very well penned!

    thanks for entering best wishes always


  • penman gold member
    August 12
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    wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest


  • Random Renee
    August 12
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    thats pretty cool i like it!

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