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Stop....

I cant seem to make this stop
I just want to wake up and not hurt anymore.
There's a pain that simply wont cease,
I just want one day of peace.

But thats too much to ask it seems
When your surrounded by hate and pain and hurt.
So tell me its ok and will get better
But I know it doesnt matter.

I just cant seems to stop
the neverending sense of weakness
Its with me wherever I go
But noone seems to know...

In a lot of pain...

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  • musiccraze2009
    November 14
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    very reflective on depression. good write


  • Ravyn Stormcrow
    August 13

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    Your not alone Brigid. Things will get better, just keep focused on your dreams and goals, knowing that each day is a new day and one day closer to achieving your dreams. one day at a time, one step at a time is all you have...take small steps, you will reach your dreams eventually.

    Ravyn