Lacking illumination, this hallway lives...
Arms protrude from the walls,pointing...
Blood drips from their fingers, vile...
Carpet of flesh, squishing under feet...
Wallpaper of skin, sectional style...
Insulation, inner decay, seen through cracks...
Faces in the ceiling, send the mind reeling...
Flashlight, creating view...
Door at the end of this stretch...
My door, adorned with blood and rust...
Cast in metal, "erbacam" etched jaggedly...
Ghoulish corridor, leading home...
This hallway macabre.
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Great! I love this piece. I've been here before, in my mind. It was like walking in the rain. Superb.
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Another masterpeice that scares the living shit out of me hehe.
I hope I never come across this hallway Macabre in real life 
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HMMM.
Scary. If there is a door and a lock to this hallway, I have somone to lock in there so that we can have some fun. -
Might even find some moose parts here. Like the inversion to be read in rear view mirror...
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A magnificent devouring piece, makes the blood rush quickly to my fingers as I write this. *Or maybe its just the excitment of a good read* Very well.
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Can be seen so many ways!
I like the way you make me see what you are seeing. I almost want to say your looking in to your own life though a dream cause the fingers are pointing at you, But it could be that you are pointing at your self. You just set a horror picture for me Great write.
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While i never was one for this type of genre i still found this to be captivating. The subtle imagery gave me the chills. i reall enjoyed this.
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wow j u continue to amaze me with ur writing
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Hehehe, I love the darkness in this piece. I have a few pieces like this as well. I have another name on here where I have done a lot of very dark and disturbing pieces as well as the ones I have under this name. So much more fun to write about the darker side sometimes.
DBH
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im too afraid!
to walk down that hallway, i can see it in my mind, such vivid imagery, and so very macabre as always, amazing how we each take to our own genre and do well with it, you certainly have found your place, well done poet!!!
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Wonderfully creepy!
You have taken the dark genre to the next level with vivid imagery and a captivating tale. Bravo!
Love,
Amera♥
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as usual your writing takes over ones brain well done
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Wow. This was incredible. Stunning imagery.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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damn bro,i feel this,my head is filled with this,trapped in the dark rescesses of the mind,listening to the thoughts of an evil spirit with demonic verses every time i talk,you are the king bro,i enjoy getting lost in your work,your just amazing bro
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"Carpet of flesh, squishing under feet...Wallpaper of skin, sectional style..." I am never coming to your house! LOL Definitely super creepy *shudders* What does "erbacam" mean? All in all great write!
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read it backwards...
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