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Real Love Duet 6:5

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deep and real traumas,

addressed now beyond font,
troubled courses in logic,

all seasoned with doubt.
but Christ our great Healer,

come release what we steal,
for free was your suffering,

that makes true love, so deep and so real.

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(yes, I know it's Deut), and it sure is short, but just gotta do that sometimes.

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  • pepping wolf
    August 20

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    hi

    oh my gosh this poem touched me I felt like I was there.
    Bye the way my name is anna thi is really goo and I sugest u should keep up the good work


  • Stirrer of Stardust
    August 13

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    Timothy,

    The last four lines particularly touch me.....they bring tears to my eyes as a matter of fact. Amazing what a moment of grace can do to a life.....to a soul, eh?

    Well said, well written, any way you look at it, well put.

    So grateful to have learned to be so grateful.....

    Love & Blessings,

    ~ ~ Janet ~ ~


    • Timothy Cameron gold member
      August 19
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      Thanks Janet

      I could tweak it, but will leave it for now. Tears like holy water. :-)


  • Navajo Apsara gold member
    August 12

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    Very true and I really love your write. but Christ our great Healer,
    come release what we steal, for free was your suffering,Yes Jesus died on the cross for our sins thank you for sharing such a beautiful write. I enjoyed this to the fullest.

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