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Burger Cycle

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Well let me see,
it's got tomato, meat and cheese
who cares if it's idiotic
at least the jerk is patriotic
if the kids are scared,
they can hold on to his beard

he will definitely get you around
this is a man that knows the town
Ms. Riftkin don't pretend,
you don't like that wheel onion
the other wheel below, you know,
is a freaking tomato
BUT he will take you where you wanna go

yea sure he's a whack
but at least he don't have a face like that:


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used prompts #4 and #7

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 31

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    I love this, and the way you combine two prompts, is like something I love to do as well.

    Riftkin


  • georgie
    August 29

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    lol... great piece... does he deliver by any chance? im feeling so hungry i could eat a ... well... bike (not the town one) lol.
    hugs,
    georgie,
    xxx


  • Poetic-Theorem silver member
    August 19

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    LMAO

    This is indeed hilarious
    My side is hurting from the laughter
    Very clever take on the prompt
    I'm sure that Riftkin will just love your choice
    OMG my cuz Billy Bob made it on your write also

    Wish you the very best of luck on the contest
    I'll be seeing you around AP
    Peace
    David


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    August 12

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    LOL --Very Funny--Love the last two lines!!!
    Well done & best of luck in the contest!


    • Still Standing gold member
      August 13
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      Thank you so much. I'm glad u had fun wit this. I had a great time writing it.


  • SpydurPoet gold member
    August 12

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    roflmao!!
    Please...*gasp*...someone help me off the floor, I fell out of my chair laughing. That was amazing. You did a fantastic job with this. Best of luck in the contest.
    Write on.
    ~*~SP~*~

    • Still Standing gold member
      August 13
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      Wow. I'm so glad I could do that with this piece. So many places I coulda wnt with this one but thanks for letting me know I chose the right place. Thanks a billion!!


  • maralisa silver member
    August 12

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    haha a funny write for the promts good luck inthe contestmaralisa


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    August 12

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    this is awesome and made me smile
    who cares as long the meat
    is an awesome treat LOl
    well penned
    Hugs Angel♥


  • StillLovingYou
    August 12

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    ok. this is making me crack up!!! i love the poem about it!! lol. best laugh of the day

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