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Fingerprints Of Life

Dwelling on fingerprints'
indentations of time spent
caring for life.
Each touch was a mark:
good intentions left behind,
memories crashing like hailstorms.

Hurtful admission attest to
blood seeping through the hearts
of those who cry.
Storm broken windows
was my insight to hellish reflection's.

Voices took me down, highs invaded peace.
In itself, we wonder how being shitfaced
happily can take peace?
My fingerprints left false hope wrapped around
the bottle.
Becoming enemy to self.



Matters not now what i have touched
for in this day....

I impart nothing, except pieces picked up,
mended carefully by the very hands that
tried to ruin.

Sobering rebirth,
change of heart,
redemption became my tissue~
softly tears were wiped away.


Capturing the winds of peoples' love
uplifting my sails.


I ride the next journey,
leaving traces of my heart upon your skin--
not my hands,  but my words in hopes
of a moment like this.


Look to the horizon, we can see
two happenings like life:
the sun setting or the sun rising.



Each has its own folly or hope.






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With love, probley not what you expected but my heart fell out dripping these words.

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  • ShadyWilbury
    September 12

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    This is an excellent write. I'm afraid I don't necessarily understand it, but will re-read ASAP to get a better understanding.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    September 12

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    Congratrulations on the Silver Cup!!

    A courageous write, one I shall bookmark. Thank you for sharing!!
    Peace & Hugs,
    xx Cyn xx

  • a u r a
    September 12

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    -'This write- is pretty awesome-I understand when you have placed it in the sad,happiness, everything category--your entire write was gripping- it had such depth and emotion in it -'Sobering rebirth,'-'
    Look to the horizon, we can see
    two happenings like life:
    the sun setting or the sun rising.'-these are my favourite lines-





  • smitaanand
    September 12

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    This is a very touching poem. I especially loved the first stanza.You have really written with the pen of genuine emotions and I will never be able to look at the sun at dawn or dusk without remembering the last line


  • RazorbladeKiss14
    September 12

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    "Hurtful admission attest to
    blood seeping through the hearts
    of those who cry.
    Storm broken windows
    was my insight to hellish reflection's." Wow I loved this poem so much! I think it deserved a gold trophy!!! Your a terrific writer!! Bravo!!!


  • tomisb
    August 14

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    The past is an anchor and can leave us with sails full of wind going no where. Rebirth comes with a sudden separation from the past. Where before the past decided who we could be in the present, now free -- we create who we will be. Aye, we leave fingerprints, but the path is not the hiker. You capture all this so well. Only when we learn to truly touch and receive the messages that come in return can we know how to live. Only the tender feel the breeze and smell spring in the blossoms of fruit trees. This simmers and then boils over with strength.
    Love
    Tom B.


  • Mr.
    August 13

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    I keep coming back and rereading this - it's really complicated and deserves several reads. The range of subjects discussed in such a short space is amazing. It's an excellent, thought provoking, and very emotional poem. Good work.


  • michellemybelle gold member
    August 13

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    This is definately one of my favs from you! I love the honestly and empowerment! Very well done!
    lots of love,
    Michelle


  • SteveS gold member
    August 12

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    I really appreciate what went into this, probably was exhausting and liberating to write. I love the redemption-tissue metaphor. If you wring this poem out you'd fill a glass with dark memories that taste like a hopeful future.

  • *whistles in amazement*

    That was amazing. Love the reflections you made here. Good one, Lisa.

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