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Fresh-Pressed...Urrr....Iron-y

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Take a left at cloud nine
    a sinister direction
When crocodile tears are present...
  administer affection

A drama-addict's happily ever after
  gleefully enacted self-sabotage
Gotta get the ol' heart pumpin'
  a sort of cardiac massage

Van Gogh's naked eustation tube
  a hole-y existance
Gift your lover with your bloody amputated ear
  gotta admire that kind of persistance

Cannibals dine upon a clown
  does this taste funny to you?
Try the marrow from the humerus
  don't mind if I do!

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  • Keith E. Gerber
    August 14

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    Well done indeed the only thing I do not like about this wonderful poem is that it is in the same contest I am in.


  • AllexisReed
    August 13

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    I had to take a moment to visit your profile page to get a feel for the author of such an outreageous poem!! Fantastic job, fantastic images on your page!

    This is such a good poem...especially the cannibal line! I love it!


  • parenchma
    August 12

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    What a collage of outrageous notions. It seems to hint at ways to relate, almost advice
    But ending up in canabalisms won''t do my dreams very nice!

  • luvdrkchocolate
    August 12

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    LOL Oh my goodness! I haven't seen you post anything in a really long time! I have forgotten how darn creative you can be. You're poems are always something else. I miss having them to peek into. My favorite stanza was the last one. I loved the irony of that. It was just too damn funny. You did a good job of expressing yourself here.

  • mhwillingham
    August 12
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    Hilarious. I laughed my face off. Great job.

  • tara wilson gold member
    August 12

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    oops....i clicked by accident. but this was really good. esp.
    "Cannibals dine upon a clown
    does this taste funny to you?" - lol.
    i think you've nailed the contest theme here.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12

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    XD This was great! I really enjoyed reading, thanks for the smile

    Thanks for sharing, have a great day!

    x


  • MuddyKing
    August 12

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    excellence

    the third stanza killed me...you are so witty girl
    and the ending is where irony tastes so good
    funny you say...humerus connected to yeah...dat funny one
    I've missed ya bigtime

    peace and hugs
    Muddy

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