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~~Who, That I Am~~


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(music enhanced)
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So much longing,...so many deep feelings,
pulling the soul into a different realm, where
the spirit has been before. Entwined with the
earth's core of existence, into the here and now,
where shadowy images cross barriers of time
and distance.
Ancestral heritage beats with a rhythm into
the world as it is presently known.
Because of all that is past,.......
there is now and today, that has acquired
all that it is,
from all that it was.
Wrapped into an aura of a time far removed,
the blood of many, has cumulated into the
present. Their traditions and ways of life
are so deeply seated, it is impossible to tell
apart the generations that have merged into
the reality of time and space.
Within this bosom, beats a Celtic heart,
that grasps at every straw in the wind
and hungers for all that has transpired,...
a sponge thirsting to fill its capacity.
The chords of old melody only serve to fuel
the fires that burn insatiable, in a
complete and impassioned plea,...
this longing,
for
who, that I am.
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  • aboomer silver member
    August 14

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    Lovely. Wonderful wording, images and emotion made this a very enjoyable read.
    Nice job!

    thank you for your entry
    best wishes in the contest


  • islekine gold member
    August 14

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    I enjoyed this very much...

    I don't have music...capabilities on my computer...so I just have your lovely words and pictures to go by. This is a lovely piece...and I enjoyed it very much.

    Within this bosom, beats a Celtic heart,
    that grasps at every straw in the wind
    and hungers for all that has transpired,...

    These words hit a chord...thanks for sharing your talent...best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on!

    and


  • dew drop77
    August 13
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    very,very beauty full ...

  • mallaw
    August 12
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    poetry

    Hi. I'm new to this. Please put with me.

  • mallaw
    August 12

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    Hard to read

    cummulated is not a word. Presently doesn't mean "now"; rather it means "soon".
    I feel that the spirit within you is vast. Is it difficult for you to express your feelings with words? I'm not trying to be negative; just it's hard to follow.


  • My Chronos gold member
    August 12

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    Very lovely arrangement. It kept me intrigued all the way to the end. Thank you so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.


  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12
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    Lovely write!

    Thanks for sharing, have a great day!

    x


  • Denerica silver member
    August 12

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    Because all that is past there is now and today...so profound, loved that line but all of it is brilliant. Describes us all searching for something within. Excellent and beautiful. Blessings.

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