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Bus Ride

BuMp bUmP BuMp
our bodies bounce
back and forth
up and down

both of our heads
crash into the
uncomfortable
plastic backboard
of the cheap
school bus seats

uneasy rides seem
an unlikely place
for an early morning snooze

yet my lids start to droop
this steamy setting becomes
a huge, churning blur

the last I see:
your silky brown head
contrasted by the bright red lights
of the emergency exit

a few later:
my eyes open,
my head rests on
something bony but comfortable

where am I?
oh, still riding.
no one seems to notice
my newly awake state

good.
my head likes where it is.

Author notes

okay so i was riding on this bus back from a school trip to new york city.
and i was sitting next to my smokinnn friend patrick
and then i fell asleep for a long time, i woke up with my head on his shoulder
so i decided to pretend to still be asleep so i could stay there haha
i eventually ended up all over him
and the great thing was he thought i was asleep still so he didnt even try to move me! wahoooooo hahahaha
peace out, hugglezzzzzzz

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  • charcoal
    August 13
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    love it (:


    • thanks. and now u have to write about...
      how u find richard simmons amazingly sexy!!!!!!!!!!
      hahahahaha u have to do it! hahaha
      hugggggggggggglezzzzz