流れ星
綺麗な華燭
天国へ･･･
(nagareboshi--
kireina kashoku
tengoku e...)
Shooting star--
Beautiful bright light
Going to heaven
Author notes
Another one written for my self-challenge of writing haiku in Japanese. Again, couldn't quite get the haiku format right for the English version. Suggestions for the English one are welcome!
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This is lovely *_*
Mmmm haiku written in Japanese are lovely~
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Yes they are and it's all your fault that I started trying to write them in Japanese, hehe!
Japanese always looks and sounds so nice...
(sidenote: wow I'm slow at replying to comments)
(p.s. thank you for your comment!
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Well I think it makes more sense to write haiku in Japanese because it's a Japanese form... and about nature, it's so much easier to write something in Japanese and keep it to that line/syllable limit because English doesn't have the right words.
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I love it!!! I woke up to this
It is beautiful!!! The imagery is excellent. Good to see the Japanese version too. Nice alliteration in L1. Keep such great work coming along!
Charishma
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Thank you for your kind comment! I've come to like writing haiku in Japanese (even though I only know a little of it) since I like the sounds and love the form of kanji
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Its good to know you are liking to write haiku.
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