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I miss that feeling...
the feeling that someone,
anyone,
actually cares.

It tears my heart apart..
I ache,
from the inside out.
Tears pour from my eyes,
crashing to the ground.

The one person...
that really did care,
is gone.
So far away.
And now i have no one.

I hate it...
I hate him.
My life crashed,
broken and shattered.
All because of him.

I lost friends..
lost a sister..
and the worst part,
was realising
that she was willing,
willing to leave me...
to give up on me...
what a sister.

I know we fought...
over something stupid.
But i would've thought,
that she knew how sensitive I was,
about that one stupid thing.

We could have worked it out...
We could have tried..
but I guess that I wasnt good enough anymore.
Just like im not good enough for anyone...

But all of that is in the past.
I cant change it,
cant fix it.
It went to far...
Broke my shattered pieces,
into a thousand more.

So whats done is done,
were done,
Im done.
Now all i can do is move on..
and try to find that person
that can glue all my pieces
back together.


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  • Little Lesley
    August 13
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    I'm sorry! But I'm SPEECHLESS. I can't really pick any words for it! It's great.
    Good Luck, wish you the best of luck.
    ♥~Little Lesley~♥


  • Symphony
    August 12

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    As they say, it takes a lifetime to build up trust / friendship / love and then can take only seconds to destroy ; am sorry to hear of you going through such a hard time - hope it picks up for you soon. you really let us into your thoughts with this one