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Banana

When lunchtime came
I was horrified to find
A squishy brown banana
that I'm trying to hide

Coz if she finds it,
my teacher will make me
eat every bite
'til it makes me feel queasy

I'm trying to escape now
without making a sound
Jim's distracting the teacher
whilst I run across the playground

My master plan succeeded
the banana's in the bin
I've reopened my lunchbox
and now I'm looking in...

Oh no, the shock, the horror
I have to stop and stare
at the bottom of my lunchbox...

SHE'S GIVEN ME A PEAR!

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originally written as a shape poem

 

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