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Broken Toy Trains

never what i would dream it would be...
the world is a catastrophe
and the broken toy trains that lay at her feet
mark bygone years of the child that was beat...

oh,
so cold alone
home
was raised in place of parts
oh,
so cold alone
stone
was raised in place of hearts

never what i would dream it would be...
the living world of a child atrophies
and the broken toy trains that lay at his feet
mark bygone years of the child that was beat...

oh,
so cold alone
home
was raised in place of parts
oh,
so cold alone
stone
was raised in place of hearts

(instrumental)

oh,
so cold alone
home
was raised in place of parts
oh,
so cold alone
stone
was raised in place of hearts

lonely road

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    August 12

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    A really great piece and i loved the imagery i got

    Fantastic and really well written.

    Excellent!