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Just Us...

I remember your whisper.
That one dark night.
Walking home from a day out.
That ambience that i miss.

Those things we did.
Games we played on those long days.
Trapped inside by the rain,
yet much fun we had.

Card tricks and wit.
Chreeky grins and laughing jokes.
The frisky games of hide and seek in that large house.
Our teasing words of love and joy.

There is nothing I wouldn't do for you.
Keeping in mind that I,
Can only look after you in certain ways.
I'll be your heart and secrets.

Whisper to me what you will.
I will keep them safely locked up.
Away from watching eyes and listening ears.
I'll be your hearts shelter while you look after me.

I will be your next set of eyes and ears.
Your other voice to sing with.
A second beating heart just for you,
and someone to hold your hand in those tough times.

My heart will be yours,
dont break it on me please.
I love you so in more words,
more than I could ever say or breathe.

For any who may slander your name,
may they be left with shame and guilt once i'm done with them.
As you would do for me
They would be sorry for such use of words against us.

Not even guns point would stop me.
I would make them see,
they would be sorry for such a thing against you.
None will unjustly do you wrong with me there!

Your first rose gift a metaphor.
Something we both love,
a metaphor to cherish that will not wilt,
or vanish in time

The rose you give is your smile and laugh.
Those hugs on cold days;
those hugs that chase the shivers away;
with warm whispers through our bodies no words could utter.

How much peace you want
On that one special day that is yours.
I know a walk through the forest and a hug will suffice.
Hidding from attention that seeks you out.

Together just us.
The celibration may be held,
if that is your wish.
Then I shall surely follow you through it.

No matter how many photographs there are to view;
both present and that of you as a babe,
causing mother trouble with messes.
I will hold your hand and run away with you.

Having you near.
My best friend and heart.
Bringing me peace and joy.
My secret Beloved.

The gentleman you are.
Holding a door open for me to enter or exit a place.
Waiting for me at the door for me to be done.
Leading me ever so gently to where we are going.

The type of man I have always wanted.
I know you'd do anything for me as i would you.
whispering me secrets to hold close.
Telling me things to hold like...

"The only one you will ever really cry for...
will be the one...
to never give you a reason to cry,"
Such words made my heart leap.

All I see is whats in you.
The gentleman,
The keeper of my heart.
You are the one to keep me for yourself.

Wear your baggy pants,
wear your smelly tank,
Dont brush your hair,
You dont have to change for me!

I am known as a realist and a reject.
My friends will have no problem with meeting you
they like to know others they can trust through me
Trust... a big factor in this game.

My friends would be yours as yours would be mine.
We will have fun and laughs together.
The rough and tough times;
just to make the bonds stronger.

My family would judge,
careful would be the introduction.
respect will be required and a quick witted reply to keep their calm.
Tell how much we will be together.

All of this would not matter,
It could be just you and I tonight.
Together in our own ambient company.
A night to remeber with you across from me.

The crickets...
A glass...
and the soft candel glow over dinner...
Only Dani and Jay...

Just us...

Author notes

Tell How Do you miss your UNKNOWN Boy Friend

Tell If you get a boyfriend, how you are going to take care for him

how much you will love him?

tell.. how much you would come forward for him.

Tell... how you will present him the very first Rose.

tell him,,. how you would celebrate his birthday?

tell.. how do you like having a boy friend..

tell.. which type of boyfriend you want..

tell how should be the appearance..

tell ... how you will introduce him to your friends and family..

tell.. how much important he will be for you ..

tell the very the Candle light dinner you have thought for him.

You have to Put Everything in Only Write.

Note:
1. normal AP rules.
2. Your Dream Boy friend's Nick at the end of write.
3. A Quote as well.
4. people from these two following groups will get Extra 10 Marks.
5. Only Single Girls are Allowed. Right?
6. All the Rules Must be Followed.

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Comments

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  • 5 plus, 5 plus, 5

    85

  • where is nick and quotation?


  • The.poet.of.hearts
    September 28
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    and I'm already Taken

  • The.poet.of.hearts
    September 28

    Edit | Reply
    humz.. you have done well. and you have not followed all rules, i'm happy join any group and you will get 10 extra marks
    good one
    wish I could be your boyfriend

    right now you scored 65 marks.
    by
    the poet of hearts and beautiful words


  • Golden Song
    September 7

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    I don't know... it's a bit bland that's all.
    I think verse 16 is a bit awkward and could be changed to include different words.
    Overall though, a good attempt

  • It brings out a new meaning to me of how poetry can make you feel vivacious and I just love the way your poem hooked me into the whole story that was concealed within.

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