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Tracing Poet's Tracings Sings Placing's Rings Wings bring without Stings

Creative talents need not presuppose
life’s web is spun within dim hermit’s cell.
Approaches vary.  Magic words work spell
unleashing energy as spirit glows,
evolves, chance seeds of challenge-change soul sows,
sloughs off Time’s mask, sheds superficial shell.
Creative insight rises, rings rhyme's bell
loud and clear here, brings winged pattern, grows
though fountains fair, felicitous poet knows
may separate true, false, cue tunes, [l]ink well
with harmony innate, sought not to sell
but share where harmony fans fresh air flows.
Chance offers insight into Time and Space,
Change adds momentum, poet traces place.

Author notes

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wor[l]ds in [b]rackets convey two or more meanings
[l]ink well :  ink well inkwell link well, - additionally [l)ink plus well (as in well up or as in depth

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  • mgmc gold member
    August 13

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    Amazing

    You have an amazing way of combining words. In particular I like the phrase....."Magic words work spell unleashing energy as spirit glows, evolves, chance seeds of challenge-change soul sows....". Beautifully expressed.


  • Lily of the Valley
    August 12

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    A poetic lesson in all that a good poet should be able to imput into their work to make it a worthwhile piece. While some can do some of it most of the time there are few who can do all of it all of the time. Perhaps the lessons is never give up trying!

  • Macsword
    August 12

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    The opening leads..

    to a desire to complete the read with understanding. Thank you.