I fell in love with you
And you make me feel complete
Delicate, clean, and vibrant...
Just like slipping between these sheets
The lights go out tonight
And all I can do is think
Tenderly and submissively...
Of you pushing me to the brink
My mind is wandering now
The way your hands ache to do
Over glistening, lustful bodies...
Struck with the desire to touch you
I love the way your lips move
Kisses lingering from ear to chin
It's like a rush filled with a promise
How the hell can this be a sin?
When your fingertips brush down my spine
And your tongue traces across my front
I shiver wildly with delight
At the need that once was a want...
Though I try, I can't resist you
My control's death is just so sweet
It's a devious comfort, secretly pure...
Just like slipping between these sheets
My first time of writing anything like erotica, and lets hope that I made it good. Thanks to my inspiration! :>
Comments
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It may be your first erotic write but you did it very very well, I love the slipping between the sheets! The imagery of fingertips was great!
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Ah..a poem of making love rather than having sex.It is subtle and i dig it.Last verse is great.
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Good write...
..... nice flow to it, and then the ending came fare before I was ready to stop reading. You really are quite talented and I should like to read more of your work!
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awesome
i like the way it was set out and the way it flowed i'm not a fan of erotica but yours is so simple and clean ?don't know if that was the right word neway i really liked it great job
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