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Take Off Your Colors.

Strip off your colors,
Expose your raw being.
Let us view what you've been hiding.
What you're so scared of us seeing.

Expel the exquisite mask
That covers your scarred face.
Let the world see the true you.
Give us something real to embrace.


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  • bladesrsharp
    August 23

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    this is great this reminds me alot of a character in the book im reading, he constantly puts on a front that contradicts his true self, that he is scared to reveal. great job and keep it up


  • Acidbath
    August 14

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    wow. i dug this so much I copied it down to give to a friend of mine thats goin through a tough time at the moment trying to beat an addiction, I hope you dont mind, this is just so dam good and apropreate for her situation i had to copy it down for her. this is great use of our language and vocab just spactacular ( sorry i still cant spell)


    • The odd one
      August 14
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      Long as you give all credit to me its all good. And I hope she gets better. Thanks for the comment.


  • Infinite-Eyes
    August 12
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    i like the diverse literature in this poem. very meaningful and true. Great good!