I move a bit of mountain every day
one five fingered scoop at a time
with a tiny seed of faith and small handfuls of dirt
growing fruits of the spirit in my back yard
tasting pieces of eternity with each bite
hungry for another dimension
dancing to music of the unseen
continually unworthy but chosen
loving and being loved with divine interpretation
perspective adding feathers to my wings
God whispers softly in the everyday things
“The purpose of life....is closer than you think.”
and I know that’s true because sometimes
in the right moment
I can feel our heart beat together
one rhythm
...tada...
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i always comment on every thing in da poem,i loved it all buh your last stanza is amazing i can't say any thing...just woooow !!
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aww thanks hun! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts.
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I loved the 4th stanza. It reaches out to me for probably quite different reasons.
Its a good poem.
I cannot leave a comment that will give it justice. Its 4am, Apologies.
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smiles. hey thanks for stopping by and reading. I'm glad you could relate to that stanza. smiles. thanks for the comment.
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Beautifully written with a great deal of emotion. Love it. Thanks for sharing your talent.
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Thanks so much for coming by. I appreciate your kind words. smiles.
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wonderful imagery and play on words!
"dancing to music of the unseen
continually unworthy but chosen"
many are called and few are chosen...isn't it wonderful knowing you've been chosen! -
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smiles. I really appreciate your thoughtful comment. Thanks so much for taking the time to read this and share your thoughts. smiles.
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I like it I like it I like it!!!! I like it SOOOO much!!!
I want to like...put it on something! Or somewhere...or something -
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smiles. yay. me too. aspects of it are going in a song. . . smiles.
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exciting!!
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Beautiful and inspiring. Worthy of your name.
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Thanks so much! I really appreciate it.
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You really made me feel the beauty of simple faith and devotion. Good writing.
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Thanks, that makes me very glad. smiles. I appreciate the comment.
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the 4th stanza.. just struck me down hard.
very beautiful, you say i have a way with words... i wish i had only a fraction of your talent
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Thank you Joe. That means a lot to me.
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