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Dark Patches, Darker Thoughts

If my shadow could speak, what would it say?
Would it whisper sweet nothings to the back of my head,
hoping to seduce my common sense?
Would it talk sass, thinking that I could be shamed into submission
Reasoning I would hang my heart in dishonor?
Would it fling my mistakes into the sunlight,
telling the world to shun and abandon me?
Tell me, if my shadow could speak, what would it say?



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