There is a fire that burns within us
that needs only a touch to ignite the flame.
The passion builds up in me higher
each time I hear you whisper my name.
My body shivers with anticapation
when I feel the touch that never grows old,
my blood rages in me with desire
when we kiss- our lips caressing with love.
Breathing in your manly scents
is like intoxicating wine.
My senses whirl-melting my heart,
holding your soul close to mine.
Stroking my body, holding me tight,
you slide in me your key to my heart.
Owning once more what was always yours.
Heaven begins where our memories start.
The taste of my inner depths on your lips,
gasping for lifes breath to live,
our bodies writhe and glisten as our aura glows.
Energy increasing promises of a lifetime to give.
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Author notes
I have a love I have had in lives before, finding him is my greatest joy.
A contest entry
- That- One Special Person! by who iam.
1500 points, ended October 28, 23 entries
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The warmth of your imagery is like' a flame' throughout this write.
Full of the passion that moves the soul of both!
Sensual indeed!
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A very senusal write indeed. Maybe one day you will find this person... Keep looking.
Oh... 3rd line... 3rd word... I suggest you spell it 'builds'. Keep the ink flowing and good luck!
~Donna~
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very lovely
full of passion
true love no doubt
beautifully written
God bless you my friend...
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Wonderful piece. A pleasure to read. Third stanza down on the last line should be 'soul' I think.
Keep up the marvellous work.
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You have some great lines here like ''you slide in me your key to my heart.'' Great emotions carry this poem to its wondrous conclusion, and your sensual imagery help it along too. Thanks for sharing your poetry here with us at AP.
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So passionate and sensual; I love it!
I can really relate to this.
It's how I feel everytime I'm with my boyfriend.
Excellent write.
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awe that is very sweet! and very sensual to be sure. I love this it has the right amount of steam and sweetness to it, a sort of love poerty latie wonderfully written and it really had an excellent flow that I really found appealing. I think that this is excellent. I am glad you have someone so sweet to depend on and love great job an excellent poem, have a great night
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Oh wow, very sensual and well written, love the words you molded together, they all fit perfectly
Thanks for sharing, have a good day!
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