If Wishes were Fishes
And Fishes were Fry
Then we'd eat until we die
What I wish for is for time to rewind so I can enjoy those times
But then I would cry
For the pain
The lump in my throat when I realize how much I miss those times
I want it all to come back
But wishing and wanting are the same thing
They never come true
I can wish for a million things right off the bat
But will they ever come true?
One came true
That was the day I met you
My wish
My want
Is to come back to you
I wish
I want
What does this poem make you feel?
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wow,this is powerful,the emotion jumps out at you towards the end,ive been through this so i know exactly how you feel
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Awe...so sad. I really liked how you rhymed this piece. You rhmed beautifully! You are quite very good at it. This is really cute. It reminds me of the old days. I miss those memories too no worries. That's true wishing and wanting is the same thing but they never do come true. Everything is basic on luck or fate half of the time. :] Anyway great write. You share a great amount of emotion. :] I love this lines the most
" But will they ever come true?
One came true
That was the day I met you
My wish
My want
Is to come back to you
I wish
I want"
Brillaint lines. Very creative and heartfelt. I know how it feels to want someone back but you cannot get them back. I know the feeling all too well
You are not alone. I love you Amber! Great write as always baby girl. Keep up the good work 
- Maria ♥
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Thank you so much Maria. Your gonna make me cry. I'm not that talented Dear. Never have been. I'm average at best. But thank you so much. I appreciate it all.
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You're more than welcome my sweet Amber. I think you did perfectly well as a writer sweetie. I love your work. Most of the time I can relate to it. :]
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