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Kill Cupid.

I'm waiting, drifting,
As you start passing me by
My heart has stopped beating
While my tongue stays tied

The air grows thicker
As my legs sink deeper
I'm rooted to this moment
Where is the ticking clock?

Slowly falling into reality
The clearing smoke swallows me
I choke as lifeless dreams burn out
Someone please relight this match

Retracing faint footsteps
Overcoming the silver lining
Breaking apart steel bonds
Killing my cupid.

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  • RamblingRose
    August 13
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    xx i love it keep it up XX the title is so good