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it's your first

Live every day like its your first
For if you don't than you are cursed
A baby see's mother earth
For everything that she is worth
So look through this babys eyes
and you are in for a big suprise
The sky is as blue, the grass is as green
Just the same as the other side
A son turns eighteen
Next to his future bride
And a black cat crosses
and no one dies
So count your losses
And save your goodbyes
For this day is the next start
Of the rest of your life.

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