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for l. monique only.

i tried.

made by me.
border set at 200.

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for L. Monique only.

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Fluff is great, but it really doesn't help; honesty is the best policy.

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • wtf

    • You lost me. Have we spoken before?

      • Not at all. This piece was the third one in a row that the random button brought me too that I also could not comment on. Either a lot of people are writing non-poetry for contest related or other reasons or I just got unlucky.

        • I see. This is just a background I made for a friend... I don't make a lot of them, but you just had to get this one instead of an actual poem... What are the odds? Heh.

          Anyway, you're more than welcome to check out my actual poems, should you feel so inclined. I'll have a look at some of yours too.

          • Seems I might owe you that much since the random button did bring me to you... however, I should mention that I don't lie when I review and I have had more than one person threaten to kill my children. That said, are you sure you want me to look at something you wrote or would you rather be content feeling like you dodged a bullet?

            • Actually, I love criticism. There's not enough honesty on this site, so have a look at anything (even my old poems, which are crap anyway) and shred it. Any help is much-appreciated.

              Don't worry... I won't kill anything or anyone. People have threatened me too, because I dared criticize their "perfect" poetry.

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