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Seasons Pass

Will seasons pass before we meet?
We have spent our lives in separate worlds,
alternate multiverses,
  distant,
    unrelated,
yet only a hair's breadth apart.
It took but a moment's fortune,
  a random click,
    to find you here and realize
that we could be as one,
  if we would only reach out,
    each toward the other.

To make our world as one
  together
seems a dream,
  hopelessly so,
    and yet I dare to dream of this,
to sleep in hope and wish to wake
  to find that you are here with me.

Beyond the blue that paints your eyes
  I see an ocean of what might be,
a current that could carry me
far from this land of unfulfilled dreams
  and wasted time.
The smile that dances on your lips,
  a contradiction,
    joyful beautiful,
      but hiding a secret heart that yearns for more,
        as I do.

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  • Camille Morin gold member
    September 26

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    I am absolutely taken up in the hopeful longing you have so beautifully portrayed here. Your language is gentle, but full of emotion. The quality is wistful. What a wonderful poem you have written.
    Sincerely,
    Camille Morin


  • Sandygram silver member
    August 19
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    Thank you for entering my contest with this wonderful poem. It was a pleasure to read. Best of luck to you. Take care, Sandy


  • Nature Song silver member
    August 11

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    Thoughts on life contest...Your words carry a message of love. Hidden beneath the depth of your words, resonate of what can and should be! Awesome write...How could I say no...

    Love it ~Sie


  • Tweedle Dum
    August 11

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    toot toot.

    man. ITS ALWAYS A TUESDAY ISN'T IT? don't you think God has plans for us all sometimes? ITS INSANE. unless you dont necessarily go with that religon, than i apologize. But i love this, its really honestly beautiful. Clickin the random button on poetry seems to always do well for me. GRACIASFOR SHARING LUV. Have a good one. Or a great one, because great is good's worst enemy!
    I heard that from somewhere..but i can't recall where.
    OH WELL!
    TOODLES.
    -DUm