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day's tattered edge







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                     tattered edges


                                                                                   bats

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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for:Contest Haiku Workshop-Fragments and Phrase by azure85

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  • azure85 gold member
    August 13

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    on day's
    tatterred edges
    bats

    A very good fragment and phrase. A very interesting L2. Thank you so much!


  • Amergin
    August 12
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    Loved your naming of evening as a tattered edge, imaginative and effective

  • Rowan gold member
    August 12
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    oh, I liked this. Very effective haiku.


  • Naughtygrlred
    August 11
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    bite me

    • DogFish silver member
      August 14
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      Not Vampire bats; bug eating bats...looking for May Flys: haiku bats!


  • Grunts Girl gold member
    August 11
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    i like the image of tattered edges

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