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Sean

i lay in bed as i hear the neighbors footsteps shuffle from upstairs.
i'm restless as i toss and turn,
i close my eyes and replace the footsteps
with you and i dancing.
shuffling our feet under wooden floors.
youre wearing that shirt you never seemed to take off,
i'm holding onto you tighter then before
because these visions are closest thing i have of you now.

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  • fall into me
    August 17

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    i really love this, mostly because of where i'm at right now. this guy and i are both about to leave home for college, and i swear i could fall in love with him. i feel like what you describe here is what i'm going to feel so soon. i'm sad and scared. thank you for making this poem beautiful and true. sorry to vent my emotions here, haha. i love the last line. and i really love the idea of you replacing footsteps with others. lovely.