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Observations

A boy runs through a garden,
arms aloft, mouth open,
shouting. Aaaah!

A girl jumps in a puddle,
hands clasped, smiling lips,
singing. La la la.

A plum drops from its tree.
No limbs. No mouth.
Falling.

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12
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    Oh this is wonderful! I love the comparison of each

    Welcome to AP, can't wait to read more
    Thanks for sharing, & have a great day!

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  • Oh.My.Juliet
    August 12

    Edit | Reply
    Oh this is wonderful! I love the comparison of each

    Welcome to AP, can't wait to read more
    Thanks for sharing, & have a great day!

    x