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Leave me alone.

Leave me alone
Stop knocking at my windows
Don't you have anything else to do?
Like I am a  tasty meat
Now you're looking for a friend
by using intimidation
I guess you have no life
You feel bored
So much that you've given up on yourselves
I'm going to bed
Now go into your beds
You've blammed the Danish society for your problems so far
As you feed yoursleves on cracks
I have a life to live
Now how about you?

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